Mr. Letony's Zanpakuto

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Name: Neikan Saikoro (Wicked Dice)

Manifestation:

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Release Command: Gamble

Family: Neutral/Fire

Level: Bankai

Sealed Description:

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Shikai Description: In Shikai Raiga’s zanpakuto in general stays the exact same as his sealed state zanpakuto. Although this is true, upon the release of his zanpakuto one pair of red dice appears suddenly in Raiga’s hands.

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Bankai Description: To be added.

Shikai Ability: Raiga rolls the dice he gains upon the release of his zanpakuto and depending on what he rolls he is able to use an effect. Once rolled depending on what number he lands he gains one of the following effects:

Note: In addition to the above if he rolls snake eyes he gains no effects, and will not be able to roll again for 2 posts.

Bankai Ability: will be added later..

Inner World:

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Zanpakutō Spirit Persona: Neikan Saikoro is a rather shy zanpakuto who does not like engaging in social activities. He usually blushes, and hides in the corner whenever confronted with an embarrassing situation. He will obey Raiga no matter what, and this is mosty do to his submissiveness, against Raiga's overwhelmingly bold personality.

Techniques:

Dice Roll Effects. [Shikai]

7: 100 average-looking white dice materialize before Raiga. These dice can be fully controlled by Raiga, him being about the control their speed (Max Speed: 55 mph) and direction. Not only are these dice composed of a metal as hard as his zanpakuto upon command they will explode at 1/3 the power of one C4 explosive spilling shards of metal shrapnel in all directions. The blast range to dice ratio is 2 feet for every one dice exploded. Charge: 1 post for a blast over 14ft: 2 post charge for any blast over 26ft: 5 post charge for maximum blast range of 45ft Cool down: 1 post cool down for medium blasts 14ft+, 3 post cool down for 26ft+. Usage: 100 Dice|CD: 6 posts with the addition that the blast range is in radius. x.x
12: A large square 25ftx25ftx25ft in dimensions dice materializes before Raiga in order to shield him from an attack as powerful as an espada’s basic cero. It will be able to lessen the effect of attacks as powerful as a Gran Rey Cero, and anything above will shatter right through it. Usage: 1|CD: 3 posts

Alejandro wrote:

it will be damaged by a good amount from an espada's cero, and will probably break since it's basically a captain level cero. A gran rey cero would also blow right through that and cause a hefty amount of damage to the person inside of it.
5-6: 10 basic white dice materialize in Raiga’s hands. When Raiga throws these dice they will expand to 5inx5inx5in in dimensions, and will shoot from the black spots located on each side spikes flying at the velocity of a bullet. Once all 10 are used the cooldown kicks in. Usage: 10 dice|CD: 2 posts
11: A large solid white dice 10ftx10ftx10ft in dimensions will appear transparent around a target, and then it will solidify locking the target inside. This skill can be overcome more so by kido, bala, and cero rather than pure brute strength. Any kido 35 and higher will break it including Hado #4 and any basic cero will break it. It would take several bala to break the dice prison, and brute strength is ineffective. In addition Raiga can rotate this box, and make it combust from the outside inward as to severly burn a captured enemy. Usage:1|CD: 15 posts

And additionally every dice used in these effects has the same sturdiness of his zanpakuto and as such can be infused with reaitsu like regular zanpakuto’s can.

Guest

you need to put those dice roll effects into your techniques, also must have reasonable cool downs. also, you have too many effects for your shikai ability as there's always a positive effect. Since this zan's based on chance, you need to have "snake eyes, or two ones" have a negative effect. Or rather, numbers like seven or eleven would have positive effects, whiel things like snake eyes or anything else wouldn't do anything at all, or have little effect towards the current battle. So please adjust it a bit.

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Edited.

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reduce that speed to 55mph, sir.

7:As for the blast radius, is it in diameters or meters? If it's by meters, then reduce the range by half for each.

12:For that effect, it will be damaged by a good amount from an espada's cero, and will probably break since it's basically a captain level cero. A gran rey cero would also blow right through that and cause a hefty amount of damage to the person inside of it.

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Ok;7 is by meters, meaning frontal explosions only, not all around, 360 ones.
12 is to be countered by espada level/captain cero, including gran rey cero. Other attacks will vary by amount and power if its below captain/espada level.

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Moved due to user's request to edit.

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Ok, edited because it had previously been over-nerfed, so now.. awaiting reapproval, and dont forget to include the relevant notes by Alejandro in your decision.

Thank you.

Guest

100 mph is still too fast >_>
Tone down that 200ft down to 40ft. It's only shikai buddy.
12:For that effect, it will be damaged by a good amount from an espada's cero, and will probably break since it's basically a captain level cero. A gran rey cero would also blow right through that and cause a hefty amount of damage to the person inside of it. Remember it's still shikai buddy.
Also, change incinerate to severely burn.

Thank you.

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All specifications added, and awaiting approval.

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Approved.

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