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PostSubject: El rinoceronte de la Selva   Fri 09 Oct 2009, 3:40 am

Resurrecion Name: El rinoceronte de la Selva

Release Phrase: Berugu assakai (Mountain Crusher)

Sealed Zanpakutō Description: A small club

Released Resurrecion Description:

Represent: Hercules Beetle

Family: Reiatsu

Ultimate Ability/Attack: Mega Cuerno- Nothing more than fancy show to the outside world, however those extra horns are not actually horns at all, in fact they are reiatsu circuits that happen to be in the shape of eyes. The circuit conducts reiatsu in such a way that it speeds up reiatsu recovery, similar to a battery. Constantly charging, Galihan uses that “battery” for the simple of effect of lessening the strains of reaitsu usage. (All cool-downs halved)

Techniques:
Fastidie Enjambre-Bug Swarm- Being of Insect nature, Galihan when hit, can transform into hundreds of thousands of small beetles that diverge from the point of impact and expand outward rapidly, in a flurry of dust*HINT* and beetle. Used either as a quick getaway, or to escape an attack, Galihan usually saves this for a last resort, reforming himself as needed, however it takes one entire post to reconstruct himself again afterwards. (4 post cooldown- 1 post recovery)

Jugo de escarabajo– Beetle Juice- By releasing a deep breath, Galihan creates a huge wave of dust that expands outward in a cloud, both coating his weapon and the air. (Stays in the air for two posts unless blown away by a WIND based MOVE) The dust is actually a weak toxin in terms of poisonous things. Its only job is to clog the reaitsu “pores” of anyone who breaths it in, congesting those “pores” to the point where reiatsu flow is constricted. (Doubles cooldown time for the next 8 posts, effects subtend with moves used after the poison, such as a person using a cero on the last post of the dust’s effects, the cooldown remains doubled since it was used in the dust timeframe) (10 post cooldown)

Cuernode Retiro- (Horn of removal) Like a insect, Galihan has a very unique “horn” Coming from the palm of his hands *Either one or both* Comes a large almost living snake like tube, attached at the end is a row of teeth. However, these teeth are more like whale teeth, acting as filters, rather than anything else. Galihan can shoot out these “spear of snake” like things towards his opponent, in which they strike him much like a spear would, deep, but not large. The most dangerous thing about them, or rather the only true dangerous thing about them, is that they absorb reiatsu, filter it so its perfectly natural, and give it to Galihan as “food”. The longer they stay in, the more they absorb, so one has to remove them, instead of just cutting them off from Galihan. (4 post cooldown, 2 posts to reform if they were damaged)
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PostSubject: Re: El rinoceronte de la Selva   Fri 09 Oct 2009, 9:24 am

None of your Techniques have a Duration.
How long can you stay in bug form?
How long does the dust last, unless removed by a Wind Tech.
How long do those spears stay in?
You should mention whether they stay till forcefully removed, or have a set duration to avoid any problems later.

Other than that, I see no problem with this.
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PostSubject: Re: El rinoceronte de la Selva   Fri 09 Oct 2009, 2:14 pm

Tech 2
(Doubles cooldown time for the next 8 posts, effects subtend with moves used after the poison, such as a person using a cero on the last post of the dust’s effects, the cooldown remains doubled since it was used in the dust timeframe)


Tech 3
The longer they stay in, the more they absorb, so one has to remove them, instead of just cutting them off from Galihan. *Meaning they stay in until they are removed, just cutting them off, like cutting the arrow shaft from an arrow, the head still stays in <.<

And one... yea forgot that one Razz

One Is....

Can stay in bug form for no longer than 6 posts, however he can't attack during those 6 posts
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PostSubject: Re: El rinoceronte de la Selva   Fri 09 Oct 2009, 2:23 pm

That works.

I hereby declare this Ress:

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PostSubject: Re: El rinoceronte de la Selva   Wed 28 Oct 2009, 7:58 pm

Since I'm now an espada, I get a second Ultimate Ability.

I tack on.

"Exoskeleton* - Due to being a bug, which has an exoskeleton, and Hierro being an exoskeleton. This ability increases Galihan's Hierro to the next level, comparable to his rank. *Such as Weak, is now Normal, or Strong to Stronger* In addition to that, he can never loss the dexterity of his Hierro, thus moves that diminish it, are null. *You may think this is a secondary thing, but in reality, its an Ultimate Ability, which means Ultimate beats out Tech's, and other abilities, unless faced with another Ultimate ability or the likes*
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Registration date : 2009-03-04

Character sheet
Name: Shishigami Jubei
Race: Arrancar.
Ranking: Decima/Cero Espada.

PostSubject: Re: El rinoceronte de la Selva   Sat 31 Oct 2009, 4:55 pm

>_> Hierro isn't an exoskeleton so to speak, but Approved regardless.

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Cero User
Weak Hierro
Sonido User
Strongest Resureccion

Post Release:
Cero Master
Strongest Hierro
Sonido Master (Varies on your transformation)
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